FICTIONAL BIOGRAPHY

Apu Fatel was born in India (01-09-1903) he was a writer of poetry, fiction, critism and was a journalist.
At the age of 12 years he started writing little stories about his life with a little touch of fiction.
when he was 16 years, he and his mother moved to Turkey, where he studied periodism few years laters.
At the age of 27 he was working on NNOT (National News Of Turkey) where he only work 2 years.

Few years later he published his firts book in which he critiques the goverment and the situation in which people where living, the he published a poem collection and many books of fiction in which you can see a criticism of fascism, totalitarism and also you can find much marxism thinking.

He died at the age of 55 from a brain cancer (17-02-1958)

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